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Half empty haiku…

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Life is always

so full of worrying things

– the cancerous sun.

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And a half-full one…

The rain had fallen

for day after sodden day

– but the flowers grew still.

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One Response to “Half empty haiku…”

  1. alisonwriting Says:
    September 5, 2008 at 7:08 pm | Reply

    Cheers! I’m glad we’re trying this because it certainly stretched me! I’ve just realised that i counted wrongly on my fingers for mine and they are 5 syllables too short. I’ll leave them as they are though!

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