Half empty haiku…


Life is always

so full of worrying things

– the cancerous sun.

* * * *

And a half-full one…

The rain had fallen

for day after sodden day

– but the flowers grew still.


One Response to “Half empty haiku…”

  1. alisonwriting Says:

    Cheers! I’m glad we’re trying this because it certainly stretched me! I’ve just realised that i counted wrongly on my fingers for mine and they are 5 syllables too short. I’ll leave them as they are though!

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